Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Lucy
Korea taxi increased a lot of fare lately.
>>Korea taxi fare increased a lot lately.
I like it because I don\'t think about anything when I am playing soccer.
>>CORRECT!
>>I don\'t think about anything when I am playing soccer so I like it.
I have a older sister sibling.
>>I have an older sister.
>>I have an older sibling.
You have to be kind to them.
>>CORRECT!
Most Korea women buy many gadgets.
>>CORRECT!
>>A lot of Korean women
Lately I want to be a charity businessman.
>>Lately, I want to be a charity businessman.
If I make a lot of money I want to get a vacation house.
>>CORRECT!
>>If I make a lot of money I want to buy a vacation house.
Korea beach around have a lot of rest house so many people stay in rest house in the summer time.
>>Korean beaches are surrounded by a lot of rest house so many people stay in rest house in summer.
Suddenly, it is raining.
>>CORRECT!
How important is the soccer in your life?
>>How important soccer in your life?
My soccer player role model is Eden hazard I think he is very special talent.
>> My soccer player role model is Eden Hazard and I think he has a very special talent.
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