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2019-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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Korea taxi increased a lot of fare lately. I like it because I don\'t think about anything when I am playing soccer. I have a older sister sibling. You have to be kind to them. Most Korea women buy many gadgets. Lately I want to be a charity businessman. If I make a lot of money I want to get a vacation house. Korea beach around have a lot of rest house so many people stay in rest house in the summer time. Suddenly it is raining. How important is the soccer in your life? My soccer player role model is eden hazard I think he is very special talent.

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~Teacher Lucy


Korea taxi increased a lot of fare lately.

>>Korea taxi fare increased a lot lately.

 I like it because I don\'t think about anything when I am playing soccer.

>>CORRECT!

>>I don\'t think about anything when I am playing soccer so I like it.

 I have a older sister sibling.

>>I have an older sister.

>>I have an older sibling.

 You have to be kind to them.

>>CORRECT!

 Most Korea women buy many gadgets.

>>CORRECT!

>>A lot of Korean women

 Lately I want to be a charity businessman.

>>Lately, I want to be a charity businessman.

 If I make a lot of money I want to get a vacation house.

>>CORRECT!

>>If I make a lot of money I want to buy a vacation house.

 Korea beach around have a lot of rest house so many people stay in rest house in the summer time.

>>Korean beaches are surrounded by a lot of rest house so many people stay in rest house in summer.

 Suddenly, it is raining.

>>CORRECT!

 How important is the soccer in your life?

>>How important soccer in your life?

 My soccer player role model is Eden hazard I think he is very special talent.

>> My soccer player role model is Eden Hazard  and I think he has a very special talent.

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