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2019-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Name an item that you have recently bought which costs an arm and a leg? Do you think you spent your money wisely when you bought that item? Why or why not? few weeks a go, My son told me \" mom I want to get a robot toy! \" so I said \" If you listen to me well and clean up your toy things, I will buy it.\" so few days ago, I have bought a robot toy for my son. that costs an arm and a leg. I think when I buy something I am very considered and careful. If I need something, I think that again.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]~


This is so sweet. ^^

And you both benefitted from that purchase too!

You were able to teach him to clean his toys, and he was able to get a new toy.

It\'s also very nice that you know how to spend your money wisely. ^^

Earning money is hard, so we must always make sure to use the money properly.

Nice job! ^^


`t. Ally



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 few weeks a go, My son told me \" mom I want to get a robot toy! \" so I said \" If you listen to me well and clean up your toy things, I will buy it.\"

>> A few weeks ago, my son told me that he wanted to buy a new robot toy. So I told him that if he listens to me well and cleans up his toys that night, I will buy him one.


 so few days ago, I have bought a robot toy for my son. that costs an arm and a leg.

>> So a few days ago, I bought a new robot toy for my son, that costs an arm and a leg.


 I think when I buy something I am very considered and careful. If I need something, I think that again.

>> I think when I buy something, I am very considerate and careful. If I need something, I think twice.

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