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Hi, [이름]~
This is so sweet. ^^
And you both benefitted from that purchase too!
You were able to teach him to clean his toys, and he was able to get a new toy.
It\'s also very nice that you know how to spend your money wisely. ^^
Earning money is hard, so we must always make sure to use the money properly.
Nice job! ^^
`t. Ally
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few weeks a go, My son told me \" mom I want to get a robot toy! \" so I said \" If you listen to me well and clean up your toy things, I will buy it.\"
>> A few weeks ago, my son told me that he wanted to buy a new robot toy. So I told him that if he listens to me well and cleans up his toys that night, I will buy him one.
so few days ago, I have bought a robot toy for my son. that costs an arm and a leg.
>> So a few days ago, I bought a new robot toy for my son, that costs an arm and a leg.
I think when I buy something I am very considered and careful. If I need something, I think that again.
>> I think when I buy something, I am very considerate and careful. If I need something, I think twice.
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