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I don\'t know if it\'s because I live in Korea, but I think Korea is really safe. And I heard that Korea is a really safe country. In Korea, drugs are illegal and there are no mafia. Geographically, I think so, too. I sometimes feel that I was born in Korea is a blessing.
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Writing Task: In your opinion, what are the safest countries in the world? Why do you think so?
I don\'t know if it\'s because I live in Korea, but I think Korea is really safe.
>>CORRECT!
And I heard that Korea is a really safe country.
>>And I heard that Korea is a very safe country.
In Korea, drugs are illegal and there are no mafia.
>>CORRECT!
OR: Drugs are illegal in Korea and there is no mafia.
Geographically, I think so, too.
>>CORRECT!
I sometimes feel that I was born in Korea is a blessing.
>>I sometimes feel that being born in Korea is a blessing.
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