homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
my hometown is incheon(인천)
>> CORRECT
i born to the incheon. however i went to the yongin(용인) at 11 years old
>> I was born in Incheon. However I went to Yong-In at 1 years old.
so truly my hometown is yongin
>> CORRECT
yongin is very good live
>> Yong-In is a very good place to live in.
because yongin have convinient traffic and many tree.
>> Because, Yong-In is convenient because, it\'s traffic-free and there are a lot of trees.
and yongin is many play places.
>> You can also go to a lot of places in Yong-In.
example everland, 캐리비안베이 (swimming fool), korea tradictional place (한국 민속촌)
>> CORRECT
(It sounds nice hahaha I want to live in Yong-In kkkk)
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