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2019-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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So my favorite thing about summer is that I can see beautiful beaches because I always go to my hometown of Busan in summer. (Busan is famous for its summer attractions in Korea. When I go there, I can not only see beautiful beaches, but also meet my family with eating delicious food. however what I hate in summer is that it rains a lot. I like to go ouside my friend. when it rains, it is difficult to go out side.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Hailey!

Smile (^_____^) It\'s Friday.

I am feeling so happy today. I hope you are, too.

Thank you for accomplishing your homework.

I have made some modifications for you to review later on.

See you later.^^

_T. Mayleen :)


So my favorite thing about summer is that I can see beautiful beaches because I always go to my hometown of Busan in summer.

>>> What I like about summer is that I can see beautiful beaches especially in my hometown, Busan.

(Busan is famous for its summer attractions in Korea.

>>> Busan is famous in Korea for its summer attractions.

When I go there, I can not only see beautiful beaches, but also meet my family with eating delicious food.
>>> When I go there, I don\'t only visit beautiful beaches, but I also meet my family and eat delicious food with them
however what I hate in summer is that it rains a lot.

>>> However, it rains a lot in summer and I hate it.

I like to go ouside my friend. when it rains, it is difficult to go out side.

>>> I like going out with my friend and when it rains, it\'s difficult to go outside.

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