Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I graduated from high school, I had to choice my university.
I had been admitted to Hallym university and Sungkonghoe university.
I thought which university was right for me.
Finally, I entered the Hallym university.
Because It has good scolarship system and well-educated professors.
Most of all, my major’s curriculum is systemic.
But Hallym university is far away from my house.
So I live in dormitory.
I don\'t regret my choice.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ellen! Thank you so much for this homework! I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
When I graduated from high school, I had to choice my university.
>>When I graduated from high school, I needed to choose my university.
I had been admitted to Hallym university and Sungkonghoe university.
I had been admitted to Hallym university and Sungkonghoe university.
>>Correct
I thought which university was right for me.
I thought which university was right for me.
>>I thought hard which university was right for me.
Finally, I entered the Hallym university.
Finally, I entered the Hallym university.
>>Correct
Because It has good scolarship system and well-educated professors.
Because It has good scolarship system and well-educated professors.
>>Correct (misspelled \"scholarship\")
Most of all, my major’s curriculum is systemic.
Most of all, my major’s curriculum is systemic.
>>Correct
But Hallym university is far away from my house.
But Hallym university is far away from my house.
>>Correct
So I live in dormitory.
So I live in dormitory.
>>So I live in a dormitory.
I don\'t regret my choice.
I don\'t regret my choice.
>>Correct
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