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2019-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Annie

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What was the most amazing scenery that you witnessed in your trips? Why is it amazing? The most beautiful scenery that I witnessed in my trips is the mountain that is covered with permanent snow and flowing glaciers in Norway. Otherwise the most amazing scenery that I witnessed in my trips is the Grand Canyon in America. The moment I saw the Grand Canyon, I couldn\'t help but be surprised by magnificence of nature. So, as soon as I saw the scene, exclamation came out of my mouth by itself. \"Wow, awesome scenery \".

강사 첨삭

Hello there Bella,

As always, it has been so nice to hear from you.

Thank you so much for always taking time to finish your homework. Keep it up!

Yours truly,

Teacher Annie

>>The most beautiful scenery that I witnessed in my trips is a mountain covered with permanent snow in Norway and it\'s it\'s also flowing with glaziers.

Otherwise the most amazing scenery that I witnessed in my trips is the Grand Canyon in America.

>>Another amazing scenery that I witnessed is the Grand Canyon in America.

The moment I saw the Grand Canyon, I couldn\'t help but be surprised by magnificence of nature.

>>The moment I saw the Grand Canyon, I couldn\'t help but be amazed of this beautiful master piece of nature.

So, as soon as I saw the scene, exclamation came out of my mouth by itself. \"Wow, awesome scenery \".

>>So, as soon as I saw the scene, continuous praises came out of my mouth. I can\'t just help saying;

\"Wow! what an awesome scenery!\"

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