Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
How is social media changing parent and child relationships?
I think social media has changed parent and child relationships a little but the changing is not great. Of course many children spend more time on social midia than before these days. But if they don’t do social media, they would play their friends. So, It has changed the relationship of friends more than parent and child relationships.
강사 첨삭
How is social media changing parent and child relationships?
I think social media has changed parent and child relationships a little but the changing is not great.
>> Correct
Of course many children spend more time on social media than before these days.
>> Correct
But if they don’t do social media, they would play their friends.
>> But if they don’t do social media, they would play with their friends.
So, It has changed the relationship of friends more than parent and child relationships.
>> Correct
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.