Homework

Hello, Hailey! ^-^

It\'s Monday. I hope you are doing alright today.

Thank you for this composition. I made some modifications especially for the word \'change/changes\'. I specifically put emphasis on \'positive changes\'.

See you later in class.

__T. Mayleen :)

If people had access to a good education, the time when the world changes will be fast.

>>> If all people had access to good education, then we\'ll all bring positive changes to the world.

>>> OR: If all people had access to good education, the time needed to bring positives changes to the world will be shortened.

Because, A good education makes people can think deeply.

>>> It\'s because with good education, people can think deeply and sensibly.

For example, when someone use a phone and he think its too big and heavy. then, someone make better machine to use his knowledge.

>>> For example, we used to think that phones were too big and heavy. Thus, with this knowledge, inventors came up with devices that are better.

I always think that a good education is the cornerstone of innovation.

>>> CORRECT