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2019-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Do you think owning a car is more practical than using public transport? Why or why not? I think that is case by case. in my opinion, owning a car is practical and convenient. Bcause if I have an imergency situation, I can drive myself anywhere. for example, at dawm my son has sick, I can\'t use public transportations. so sometimes owning a car is useful.

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Hi, [이름]! ^^


Thank you for sharing this with me.

That\'s true! ^^

It\'s very hard to commute, especially when there are so many  possible emergencies that could happen.

See you in our next class!


~t. Ally



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I think that is case by case. 

>> I think it depends on the case.


 In my opinion, owning a car is practical and convenient.

>> CORRECT!


Bcause if I have an imergency situation, I can drive myself anywhere.

>> Because if I have an emergency situation, I can drive myself anywhere.


 for example, at dawm my son has sick, I can\'t use public transportations. 

>> For example, if at dawn, my son suddenly gets sick, I can\'t use the public transportation.

 

 so sometimes owning a car is useful.

>> So sometimes, owning a car is useful.

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