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Hi, [이름]! ^^
Thank you for sharing this with me.
That\'s true! ^^
It\'s very hard to commute, especially when there are so many possible emergencies that could happen.
See you in our next class!
~t. Ally
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I think that is case by case.
>> I think it depends on the case.
In my opinion, owning a car is practical and convenient.
>> CORRECT!
Bcause if I have an imergency situation, I can drive myself anywhere.
>> Because if I have an emergency situation, I can drive myself anywhere.
for example, at dawm my son has sick, I can\'t use public transportations.
>> For example, if at dawn, my son suddenly gets sick, I can\'t use the public transportation.
so sometimes owning a car is useful.
>> So sometimes, owning a car is useful.
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