homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If lying is wrong, are white lies okay? Explore your answer.
I changed my original thinking about the homework you gave me
I thought I can white lie for others but I realized that it wasn\'t always for others
Let me give you an example
There was a woman who has incurable cancer
The woman husband say most cancers can be cured if found early
she has surgery that didn\'t know the truth
fortunately the surgery well and the man told her the truth
As for this example I thought white lie is not good for the listener at all
Because if the surgery goes wrong and she lose her life
He didn\'t give her time to end her life
The reason for telling a white lie is people don\'t want be a bad person
and there is a benefit myself by telling white lie
강사 첨삭
Hi YJ!
Thanks for this answer.
Be careful on your spelling, punctuation, and capitalization when writing a composition.
Here are my corrections.
I changed my original thinking about the homework you gave me.
>> I changed my previous thought about the homework you gave me.
I thought I can white lie for others but I realized that it wasn\'t always for others
>> OR: I thought I can say white lies for others but I realized that it wasn\'t always for others.
Let me give you an example
>> Let me give you an example.
There was a woman who has incurable cancer
>> There was a woman who has an incurable cancer.
The woman husband say most cancers can be cured if found early
>> The woman\'s husband says that most cancers can be cured if found early.
she has surgery that didn\'t know the truth
>> She had surgery and no one knows the truth.
fortunately the surgery well and the man told her the truth
>> Fortunately, the surgery went well and the man told her the truth.
As for this example I thought white lie is not good for the listener at all
>> As for this example, I thought white lie is not good for the listener at all.
Because if the surgery goes wrong and she lose her life
>> Because if the surgery went wrong then she can lose her life.
He didn\'t give her time to end her life
>> He didn\'t give her time to end her life.
The reason for telling a white lie is people don\'t want be a bad person and there is a benefit myself by telling white lie
>> The reason for telling a white lie is because people don\'t want be bad and there is a benefit of telling white lies.
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