homework
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Describe the world 100 years from now. Describe how people live, and new inventions and also the things that will not change.- (^-^)
I remember a novel story about tour to going back 100 years ago.
In a future, the hero decided to go back 100 years ago for his holidays.
he always longs for the past wishing to experience classic mood.
When he goes to the time 100 years ago, at first he was shocked because of the smell.
The smell from aniimal wastes with flies and insects all over the road.
There is no sewer sytem and rotten food is also all around.
When I think about 100 years ago befrore I was born, I also thought that It must be so classical and vintage.
But reality of 100 years ago will break my yearning.
강사 첨삭
Hi \"Ate\" [이름]! ^ ^ Thank you so much for your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^
I could just imagine what life was in the past. A hundred years back would mean no electricity, no advance technology and no comfortable living at all. It\'s nice to imagine how life was, like what you have said; classical and vintage, but in reality it could also be very hard.
You made a great point here; but you missed out on the question. A hundred years from now, means what would life be in the future, maybe in 2119. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I remember a novel story about tour to going back 100 years ago.
>>I remember a novel about going back 100 years ago.
In a future, the hero decided to go back 100 years ago for his holidays.
In a future, the hero decided to go back 100 years ago for his holidays.
>>The hero decided to go back a hundred years for his holiday.
he always longs for the past wishing to experience classic mood.
he always longs for the past wishing to experience classic mood.
>>He always longed of going back to the past and experience a classic mood/world.
When he goes to the time 100 years ago, at first he was shocked because of the smell.
When he goes to the time 100 years ago, at first he was shocked because of the smell.
>>When he was able to go back a hundred years past, he was shocked because of the smell.
The smell from aniimal wastes with flies and insects all over the road.
The smell from aniimal wastes with flies and insects all over the road.
>>The smell of animal wastes, flies and insects were everywhere.
There is no sewer sytem and rotten food is also all around.
There is no sewer sytem and rotten food is also all around.
>>Correct (misspelled \"system\")
When I think about 100 years ago befrore I was born, I also thought that It must be so classical and vintage.
When I think about 100 years ago befrore I was born, I also thought that It must be so classical and vintage.
>>Correct (misspelled or typo error with \"before\")
But reality of 100 years ago will break my yearning.
But reality of 100 years ago will break my yearning.
>>Correct
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