Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Writing Exercise: In 5 sentences, please write your expectations from the class and from the teacher.
Hello, Sharon!
First, I want to have confidence in speaking English. When I speak English, I\'m worried that my English expression is wrong and I might be shamed even though I know just saying something is more important for improving my English skills. So, I hope to speak a lot and be used to speak in English.
Second, I often speak English expressions that are not really spoken expressions like using Google translate. So, if my expression is awkward, please correct my expressions.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It has been a while.
I\'m glad you decided to do your homework.
It\'s good practice for you.
Please take note of the suggestions below.
I hope you can apply them in your speaking as well.
I\'ll talk to you soon!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
First, I want to have confidence in speaking English. >> Correct
When I speak English, I\'m worried that my English expression is wrong and I might be shamed even though I know just saying something is more important for improving my English skills.
>> When I speak English, I\'m worried that my English expression is wrong and I might be embarrassed even though I know that just saying something is more important to improve my English skills.
So, I hope to speak a lot and be used to speak in English.
>> So, I hope to speak a lot and get used to speaking in English.
Second, I often speak English expressions that are not really spoken expressions like using Google translate.
Second, I often speak English expressions that are not really spoken expressions like using Google translate.
>> Second, I often use English expressions that are not really common like the ones I see using Google translate.
So, if my expression is awkward, please correct my expressions.
>> So, if my expression seems awkward, please correct it.
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