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학생이 쓴 원문
I got dressed up When I got a award about art in 7 years ago.
Because it was korean-art award. And this place came many peoples. At that time I memories I so cried. because I did not expected award. Even now, I\'m nervous.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
That is really impressive.
I bet you\'re really talented.
I want to see your work someday.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I got dressed up When I got a award about art in 7 years ago.>> I got dressed up when I won an award for my art work seven years ago.
Because it was korean-art award.
Because it was korean-art award.
>> It was a Korean Art award.
And this place came many peoples.
>> Many people came to the awarding ceremony.
At that time I memories I so cried.
>> I remember that I cried a lot during that time.
because I did not expected award.
>> That\'s because I didn\'t expect to get an award.
Even now, I\'m nervous.
>> I\'m still nervous until now.
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