Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Have you ever decided to change the group that you usually hang out with?
Yes, I have decided to change my group. It is meeting of baby mothers. First They send to sns messages more than 100. I got confused situations. And I was hard to response. So I was say good bye this meeting. If you want to contact to me,I was say call me individually
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I agree that it could get confusing.
They also get mad when you don\'t reply.
It\'s better to quit that group.
You will have more freedom.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Yes, I have decided to change my group.
>> Yes, I have decided to change my group of friends.
It is meeting of baby mothers.
>> I stopped hanging out with other mothers who have babies.
First They send to sns messages more than 100.
>> They usually send more than a hundred messages in a group chat.
I got confused situations.
>> There are some things that I\'m confused about.
And I was hard to response.
>> It\'s difficult to reply to their messages.
So I was say good bye this meeting.
>> That\'s why I said goodbye to the group.
If you want to contact to me,I was say call me individually
>> If I want to contact any of them, I would just call them individually.
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