Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is the motto of your life? Explain.
First, My motto of life is that the Diligent person is not poor. I was so hard high-school for poor family environment. So I effort to not poor and I save money and I work hard. Second, Dreaming have person is get a not old. Everyday I study about a variety of another part. At Last, I prepare to second life in the futures.
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Hi [이름]!
You are really hardworking today.
It seems you had enough time to write your compositions.
I appreciate your hard wok.
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
First, My motto of life is that the Diligent person is not poor. >> First, my motto in life is \" A diligent person is not poor.\"
I was so hard high-school for poor family environment.
>> My family was poor so I had a hard time when I was in high school.
So I effort to not poor and I save money and I work hard.
>> That\'s why I made an effort to work hard and save money.
Second, Dreaming have person is get a not old.
>> Another motto that I believe in is \" A person who has a dream never gets old.\"
Everyday I study about a variety of another part.
>> I study a variety of things every day.
At Last, I prepare to second life in the futures.
>> Finally, I want to prepare for a better life in the future.
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