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Hi there! ^-^
Hailey, this is a very good composition.
You have a point. Actually, not only children but adults too get flustered when it\'s their first time to experience things.
I guess it\'s human nature. I will see you later in class.^^
__T. Mayleen :)
What do you think children worry about the most? Kindly answer in 3-5 sentences.
What children are most worried about is their first experience.
>>> What children worry about the most is their first time to experience things.
For example, when I went on a trip with my nephew, he kept crying during takeoff.
>>> For example, when I went on a trip with my nephew, he kept crying during our flight.
Because he was not used to hearing the sound of the engine and to the cabin.
>>> It was because he wasn\'t used to the sound of the engine and it\'s his first time to be in a cabin.
So our family had a lot of truoble to make him don\'t cry.
>>> Thus, our family had struggled to pacify him or to stop him from crying.
Fortunately, The next flight(the return flight) he cryied less than before.
>>> Fortunately, he cried less in our flight back home.
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