Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름]!
~Teacher Lucy
The most important habit of successful people is diligent.
>>The most important habit of successful people is diligence.
>>The most important habit of a successful people is being diligent.
My friend has always been effort everything so he will succeed.
>>My friend has always been giving effort to everything so he will succeed.
We have our summer vacation plan to go to beach.
>>We have our summer vacation plan which is going to the beach.
Of course, I will attend your birthday party.
>>CORRECT!
>>I will absolutely attend your birthday party.
My plan is getting married withthin 2years after save a lot of money .
>>My plan is getting married with in 2years after saving a lot of money .
All of the people have to eat included various nutrition food.
>>All of the people have to eat included various nutritious food.
Korean tend to be independent 20 between 25years old.
>>Korean tend to be independent between 20 to 25 years old.
Lately, my goal is to run academy and having another job.
>>Lately, my goal is to run an academy and having another job.
Korea restaurant offer water unlike foreign restaurant.
>>Korean restaurants offer water unlike foreign restaurants.
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