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2019-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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I\'m good at midfield than other positions in soccer. I want to raise independent my future baby. Hongdae people uniquely putting on clothes is trend. I really want to speak English fluent. That\'s why your accent is seriously. I think all of the delegates should be an example for the staffs. If you want to me I assist you. Korea,japan,north korea,America have had a lot of conference latest. How important is exercising for health? CaN I travel with your guys?

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Thank you [이름]!


~Teacher Lucy


I\'m good at midfield than other positions in soccer.

>>CORRECT!

 I want to raise independent my future baby.

>> I want to raise my future baby to be independent .

 Hongdae people uniquely putting on clothes is trend.

>>Hongdae people put on clothes uniquely as trend.

 I really want to speak English fluent. 

>> I really want to speak English fluently. 


 That\'s why your accent is seriously.

>>That\'s why your accent is serious.

 I think all of the delegates should be an example for the staffs.

>>CORRECT!

 If you want to me I assist you.

>>CORRECT!

 Korea,japan,north korea,America have had a lot of conference latest. 

>>Korea, Japan, North Korea and America have had a lot of conference lately

 How important is exercising for health?

>>CORRECT!

 Can I travel with your guys?

>>CORRECT!

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