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2019-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1.i think Friday or Saturday is good having a family gatheringg day because most people have off day next day after work in Friday or Saturday. 2.yes of course .I think using public transportation is good for environment and decreasing various accidents by car either drunk driving.however only using public transportation regret because economic balance so balance is very important.

강사 첨삭

Than you [이름]!

~Teacher Lucy

1.i think Friday or Saturday is good having a family gatheringg day because most people have off day next day after work in Friday or Saturday.

>>I think Friday or Saturday is good for having a family gathering because most people have off day during next day.

2.yes of course .

>>CORRECT!

>>Absolutely!

I think using public transportation is good for environment and decreasing various accidents by car either drunk driving.

>>I think using public transportation is good for environment and it decreases various car accidents to drunkard drivers.

however only using public transportation regret because economic balance so balance is very important.

>>Furthermore, public transportation stabilize economy.

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