Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The smart phone.
Because if I have this one, I\'m able to text message, call, watch movies and search the internet.
It\'s easy to do anything.
And the pictures taken with the iphone are of good quality.
So I really need this.
강사 첨삭
Writing Task: What\'s your most valued possession?
>> My most valued possession is my Smartphone.
Because if I have this one, I\'m able to text message, call, watch movies and search the internet.
It\'s easy to do anything.
And the pictures taken with the iphone are of good quality.
So I really need this.
Because if I have this one, I\'m able to text message, call, watch movies and search the internet.
>> Because if I have it, I\'m able to send text messages, make calls, watch movies and search in the internet.
It\'s easy to do anything.
>> CORRECT!!
And the pictures taken with the iphone are of good quality.
>> The pictures taken with the iPhone are of good quality.
So I really need this.
>> CORRECT!!
Hi Lucy!
Thank you for answering your homework! Good Job!
I agree with everything you said! My Phone is my most valued possession too!
Please continue answering your homework so I could check
your writing skills. It is also an effective way to learn what grammar mistakes you often make.
See you on our next class!
~ ♥♥ T. Louise ♥♥
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