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2019-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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Hi Jedah! I was waiting your call today. I wondered what happened to you so, I called Power English center. They said, you called me 4 times but I did not get the calls. They said also, It happens from time to time when telecome connection is not good in service. (It is rainning in Korea. is it the reason?) I went to a golf club with my friends yesterday. We were sweating a lot because it was so hot and humid. When we finished the rounding, we were just like soaked mice ^^ I was very happy to feel my golf swing gets better and better. Anyway, Have a great day and see you tomorrow!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I was also wondering what happened to you! Now I understand. No worries. ^ ^ I hope you have a good rest and I hope to talk to you tomorrow! ^ ^ Take care! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I was waiting your call today.

>>I was waiting for your call today.
I wondered what happened to you so, I called Power English center.

>>Correct
They said, you called me 4 times but I did not get the calls.

>>Correct
They said also, It happens from time to time when telecome connection is not good in service.

>>They also said that it usually happens when telecom connection is not good.
(It is rainning in Korea. is it the reason?)

>>It is raining in Korea, probably the reason why.
I went to a golf club with my friends yesterday.

>>Correct
We were sweating a lot because it was so hot and humid.

>>Correct
When we finished the rounding, we were just like soaked mice ^^

>>When we finished the rounds, we were just like soaked mice ^^
I was very happy to feel my golf swing gets better and better.

>>I was very happy because I felt that my golf swing is getting better and better.
Anyway,
Have a great day and see you tomorrow!

>>Correct

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