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2019-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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if i live a another different man i think that i want to be a famous sports player because i like every sports and doing well, my hobby is playing bad[이름]ton and get in shape in gym so my hope is matched players each other in another country for world match tour in other word, i want to go every country by myself! thank you today!!!

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

if i live a another different man i think that i want to be a famous sports player

because i like every sports and doing well, my hobby is playing bad[이름]ton and get in shape in gym

>>If I would be another man, I think that I want to be a famous sports player

because I like every sport and I am doing well.

My hobby is playing bad[이름]ton and get in shape in gym.

>>My hobby is playing bad[이름]ton and getting in shape in the gym.

so my hope is matched players each other in another country for world match tour
in other word, i want to go every country by myself!
>>My dream is to be matched with players in different countries for a world match tour.

i want to go every country by myself!

>>I want to go to every country by myself!

thank you today!!!

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