homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I am a student so i will go to the school and study more than now. Also play with my friends many times. And i will watch the movie a lot.
강사 첨삭
HOMEWORK: How important is farming in your country?
I think I am a student so i will go to the school and study more than now.
>> I am a student so I will go to school and study more.
Also play with my friends many times.
>> I play with my friends quite often.
And i will watch the movie a lot.
>> I also watch movies a lot.
Dearest [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework dear.
Please keep on writing. It will help you improve your sentence construction.
Review and practice the corrections I made for you.
Take care!
~ ♥♥ T. Louise ♥♥
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.