homework
학생이 쓴 원문
My Closest Friend
My closest friend is always changing over time.
Currently my closest friend is Hua.
We first met at the elementary school.
At that time she was just one of my acquaintance.
We have gotten to know each other better since we met again in Seoul.
In Seoul we are living near.
So we usually meet during the free time to have dinner together.
Family Dinner
The last time my family had dinner together was in last April on my husband’s birthday.
We went to a buffet. I remember that last year at the same time we also went to the same place to celebrate my husband’s birthday.
The difference is last year we were 4 and this year we were 5. Because my son was born in May last year.
As usual we didn’t talk much during the meal. We just say “Happy birthday to you.” and enjoyed the food.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for accomplishing the essays! These are my corrections:
- Teacher Debbie
My closest friend is always changing over time.
>> My closest friend always change over time.
Currently my closest friend is Hua.
Currently my closest friend is Hua.
>> correct
We first met at the elementary school.
We first met at the elementary school.
>> correct
At that time she was just one of my acquaintance.
At that time she was just one of my acquaintance.
>> At that time, she was just one of my acquaintances.
We have gotten to know each other better since we met again in Seoul.
We have gotten to know each other better since we met again in Seoul.
>> correct
In Seoul we are living near.
In Seoul we are living near.
>> We currently live near to each other.
So we usually meet during the free time to have dinner together.
So we usually meet during the free time to have dinner together.
>> So we usually meet during our free time to have dinner together.
Family Dinner
Family Dinner
The last time my family had dinner together was in last April on my husband’s birthday.
>> The last time my family had dinner together was last April on my husband’s birthday.
We went to a buffet.
We went to a buffet.
>> correct
I remember that last year at the same time we also went to the same place to celebrate my husband’s birthday.
>> correct
The difference is last year we were 4 and this year we were 5. Because my son was born in May last year.
The difference is last year we were 4 and this year we were 5. Because my son was born in May last year.
>> correct
As usual we didn’t talk much during the meal.
As usual we didn’t talk much during the meal.
>> correct
>> or: We usually don\'t talk much during the meal.
We just say “Happy birthday to you.” and enjoyed the food.
>> We just said “Happy birthday to you.” and enjoyed the food.
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