Homework~~

2019-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Louise

학생이 쓴 원문

I get more stress when I will take a test. Because, for I\\\'m going to get a good job, I have to get good score. I have to study hard, especially when I have a test tomorrow. But I\'m happy after I finished a test. I can take a rest until the next test. p.s There\'s [이름]ething I want to tell you. I don\'t want to review the text book. Thank you ^^♡

강사 첨삭

Writing Task: What are the areas of your life where stressful situations take place more often?


I get more stress when I will take a test.
>>  I get more stressed out when I\'m about to take a test.


Because, for I\\\'m going to get a good job, I have to get good score.
>> Because for me to do a good job, I have to get a good score.

I have to study hard, especially when I have a test tomorrow.
>> I have to study hard, especially when I have a test the next day.

But I\'m happy after I finished a test.
>> But I\'m happy after I finish a test.

I can take a rest until the next test.

>> CORRECT! 


Hi Lucy!
Thank you so much for answering your homework!
Please keep on writing. It will help you improve your sentence construction.
Talk to you soon!
-Love,
Teacher Louise.




파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·