Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름]!
~Teacher Lucy
I hate a affected story.
>>I hate a tragic story.
My nationality is Korean.
>>CORRECT!
>>I am [Name].
I proud of Korean.
>>I proud to be a Korean.
When I arrived my working place,my first job is cleaning in the ground.
>>
Did you eat for meal?
>>Did you eat?
>>Did you have a meal?
Did you eat which one?
>>Which one did you eat?
Did you cancel the accommodation?
>>CORRECT!
>>Did you cancel the reservation?
Where did you go?
>>CORRECT!
Where did you come?
>>CORRECT!
I remember my childhood had bad memories.
>>CORRECT!
>>I can still recall the bad memories during my childhood days.
But I don\'t think that\'s not bad.
>>CORRECT!
Which part of you childhood did you like it?
>>Which part of your childhood did you like?
Which part of you childhood is most bad things?
>>Which part of you childhood is the worst things?
Which part of you childhood is good things?
>>Which part of you childhood are the good things?
Show me your ability.
>>CORRECT!
Show me your brave.
>>Show me your braveness.
These day, I want to do a barbecue party with the I know people it will be good to have some vegetables,meat and seafood with a barbecue.
>>These days, I want to do a barbecue party with the people I know, it will be good to have some vegetables, meat and seafood with a barbecue.
last one is drinking beer.
>>The last one is drinking beer.
It will be perfect a barbecue party.
>>CORRECT!
The tongue of everybody feel five taste.
>>The tongue tastes.
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