Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I don’t agree with this matter.
Because, l think the most important thing in choosing a job is not money.
Money is very important for people’s life, but money is not everything in the life.
So the most important thing is enjoyment.
lf you enjoy your work, the work is more efficient.
When you chose the job, you consider your aptitude, interest.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ellen! Thank you for spending time in doing your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^^
Good thoughts on this one too! Way to go! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I don’t agree with this matter.
>>Correct
Because, l think the most important thing in choosing a job is not money.
Because, l think the most important thing in choosing a job is not money.
>>Correct
Money is very important for people’s life, but money is not everything in the life.
Money is very important for people’s life, but money is not everything in the life.
>>Money is important in people\'s lives, but money is not everything.
So the most important thing is enjoyment.
So the most important thing is enjoyment.
>>Correct
lf you enjoy your work, the work is more efficient.
lf you enjoy your work, the work is more efficient.
>>Correct
When you chose the job, you consider your aptitude, interest.
When you chose the job, you consider your aptitude, interest.
>>When you choose a job, you must also take into account your aptitude and interests.
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