homework
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HOMEWORK: What do you think of married couples who decide not to have any children?
i think that this thing is a theirs free because they are married about theirs own opinion.
so i agree with that and not to have children problem is doen\'t matter.
but if they have a baby, their life is more happy and enjoyful
engagement is very important things in our world problems because every years changing that percent of having a baby is getting decreased. what is the meaning of this happened is that if they are having baby, more difficult to take care of them.
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but if they have a baby, their life is more happy and enjoyful
engagement is very important things in our world problems because every years changing that percent of having a baby is getting decreased.
I think that this thing is a theirs free because they are married about theirs own opinion.
>>I think that this thing is a an expression of freedom of speech because they are married about they have their own opinion.
so i agree with that and not to have children problem is doen\'t matter.
>>It doesn\'t matter, So I agree with not having children.
but if they have a baby, their life is more happy and enjoyful
>>But if they would have a baby, their life is going to be happier and joyful.
engagement is very important things in our world problems because every years changing that percent of having a baby is getting decreased.
>>Engagement is a very important thing in our world, because every year, the percentage of having a baby is getting decreased.
what is the meaning of this happened is that if they are having baby, more difficult to take care of them.
>>Having a baby is more difficult, especially taking care of them.
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