homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-What is your ideal way of spending your time alone?- (^-^)
I like being alone in my house.
I have a lot of things to do when I am at home alone.
Firs of all, I like bathing specially lower body bathing.
I have been doing lower body bathing for more than 10 years.
It really helps me keeping my clean skin and detoxing my body.
When I finish bathing, I scrub my body and face and then, I put mask sheet on my face.
I really like caring my body and face when I have times.
Second thing is,
I like cook something although I am not a good cook.
When I am alone , I try to cook very difficult dishes which need many times to cook such like Galbijim ( beef rib stew).
And other thing is,
I orginige my dressing room and all clothes drawers.
I change my simple furniture location to get refresehness.
I clean my refrigerator.
and so on...
Well, with this writting, I have to confess that I am a really house wife.TT
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for this homework. You just don\'t know how much I appreciate it and how much you make me smile with your thoughts. ^ ^
Yes, it\'s the same with me. I prefer to pampering myself and cleaning the house when I\'m alone. While doing so, I also put on my favorite record and turn on the music high! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>Correct
I have a lot of things to do when I am at home alone.
I have a lot of things to do when I am at home alone.
>>Correct
Firs of all, I like bathing specially lower body bathing.
Firs of all, I like bathing specially lower body bathing.
>>Correct
I have been doing lower body bathing for more than 10 years.
I have been doing lower body bathing for more than 10 years.
>>Correct
It really helps me keeping my clean skin and detoxing my body.
It really helps me keeping my clean skin and detoxing my body.
>>Correct
When I finish bathing, I scrub my body and face and then, I put mask sheet on my face.
When I finish bathing, I scrub my body and face and then, I put mask sheet on my face.
>>Correct
I really like caring my body and face when I have times.
I really like caring my body and face when I have times.
>>I really like caring for my body and face especially when I have the time.
Second thing is,
I like cook something although I am not a good cook.
Second thing is,
I like cook something although I am not a good cook.
>>I like to cook something although I am not a good cook.
When I am alone , I try to cook very difficult dishes which need many times to cook such like Galbijim ( beef rib stew).
When I am alone , I try to cook very difficult dishes which need many times to cook such like Galbijim ( beef rib stew).
>>When I am alone , I try to cook very difficult dishes which take a long time to cook such like Galbijim ( beef rib stew).
And other thing is,
I orginige my dressing room and all clothes drawers.
And other thing is,
I orginige my dressing room and all clothes drawers.
>>I organize my dressing room and all the clothes in my drawers.
I change my simple furniture location to get refresehness.
I change my simple furniture location to get refresehness.
>>I change my simple furniture location to get a new look.
I clean my refrigerator.
I clean my refrigerator.
>>Correct
and so on...
and so on...
>>Correct
Well, with this writting, I have to confess that I am a really house wife.TT
Well, with this writting, I have to confess that I am a really house wife.TT
>>Well, writing this, I can say that I am really a housewife. TT
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