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2019-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

1-(1)I used to collect stamp 1-(2)Is it a correct sentence? 2-(1)please give me a glass of water. 2-(2) The grass is so green 3-1 Your laces are undone. 3-2 I have experience that I participate a long race program that I walked 420km for 17days 4-1 There is a lighter on the street. 4-2 I want to be a book writer. 5-1 Here is your locker key. 5-2 The rocker is good at singing.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday! ^^,)


You were asked to choose just one pair, but you used all five pairs in a sentence. I really appreciate your effort.

I must say you\'re getting better in composing sentences. Just make sure to apply all the principles/rules necessary, okay? ^-^ See you later in class.


Have a fun and safe weekend!

__T. Mayleen :)



1-(1)I used to collect stamp

>>> I used to collect stamps.
1-(2)Is it a correct sentence?

>>> CORRECT


2-(1)please give me a glass of water.

>>> CORRECT [Please give me a glass of water.]

2-(2) The grass is so green

>>> CORRECT


3-1 Your laces are undone.

>>> Your laces are undone. [CAREFUL WITH YOUR CHARACTERS.]

3-2 I have experience that I participate a long race program that I walked 420km for 17days

>>> I have experienced participating in a long race and it took me 17 days to walk a distance of 420 km.


4-1 There is a lighter on the street.

>>> CORRECT

4-2 I want to be a book writer.

>>> CORRECT


5-1 Here is your locker key.

>>> CORRECT

5-2 The rocker is good at singing.

>>> CORRECT

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