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I think farming is very important in my country. Becaues if they does not do farming all food will disappear. But these days farmer is less than past. It is a very big problem.
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HOMEWORK: How important is farming in your country?
I think farming is very important in my country.
>> CORRECT!
Becaues if they does not do farming all food will disappear.
>> Because if there are no Farmers, we will not have a source of food.
But these days farmer is less than past.
>> But these days, there aren\'t enough farmers.
It is a very big problem.
>> CORRECT!
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