Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Given a chance to go back to the past, what things will you learn and why?
If I go back to my twenties, I will go to foreign country for English language training courses. Whenever I go on a trip to other countries, I feel the need of English. It\'s hard to study English for me. Because I am old. As I get older, my memory decreases. But I will keep trying to learn English.
강사 첨삭
Hello Bella,
Thank you for taking time to finish this homework.
I really do appreciate it. Your answer is so true, I\'ll learn the same if I had more time.
Anyways, you can always improve in English, there\'s no age limit in learning English.
Teacher Annie
If I go back to my twenties, I will go to foreign country for English language training courses.
>>If I could go back to my twenties, I will go to a foreign country and learn English language.
Whenever I go on a trip to other countries, I feel the need of English.
>>Whenever I went on a trip to other countries, I always feel the need of speaking English.
It\'s hard to study English for me. Because I am old.
>>It\'s hard to study English to me because I am already old.
As I get older, my memory decreases.
>>CORRECT
But I will keep trying to learn English.
>>But I will keep on learning English.
OR>>But I will keep on trying until I can be fluent in English.
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