Homework

2019-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

I think that the ideal way of spending time is to do what I like. I don’t like spending my time alone. I always want to be with someone. I love playing badminton with someone, meeting my friends and talking with my family. But when I study, I spend time alone. Because I want to be quite and l have to concentrate.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ellen! Thank you so much for spending time with your homework. I appreciate it a lot.
Nice thoughts on this one. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah

I think that the ideal way of spending time is to do what I like.
>>Correct
I don’t like spending my time alone. 
>>Correct
I always want to be with someone.
>>Correct
I love playing badminton with someone, meeting my friends and talking with my family.
>>Correct
But when I study, I spend time alone.
>>Correct
Because I want to be quite and l have to concentrate.
>>I need it to be really quiet, so I can concentrate with my studies.

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