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2019-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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I always think to have to change education policy of Korea for next generation There were many uniform in my house but now there aren\'t . Since it\'s your-I can\'t make it .it is difficult to me. give me an example. I always tell them . Your guys have to remember this sense. what\'s going on? did you already have for breakfast? I don\'t have ID so I am gonna make it. All coaches emphasize player good training attitude. A influence of person can change many people. The furniture was made by trees.

강사 첨삭

Thank you [이름]!


~Teacher Lucy


I always think to have to change education policy of Korea for next generation

>>I always think to change the education policy of Korea for the next generation.

 There were many uniform in my house but now there aren\'t .

>>CORRECT!

>>There was  a lot of uniform at home but now there\'s none.

 I always tell them .

>>CORRECT!

>>I always share to them.


Your guys have to remember this sense.

>>CORRECT!

>>You have to remember this issue.

 what\'s going on?

>>CORRECT!

>>What\'s the matter?

 did you already have for breakfast?

>>Did you already have breakfast?

 I don\'t have ID so I am gonna make it.

>> I don\'t have ID so I can\'t make it.

 All coaches emphasize player good training attitude.

>>All coaches emphasize to players a good training attitude.

 A influence of person can change many people.

>> An influencer can change many people.

 The furniture was made by trees.

>> The furniture was made out of trees.

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