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2019-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

-Write about something you regret having done. Point out what could have happened if you had not made that decision.- (^-^) I regret many things that I had done before but I know it is useless and waste of my times keeping in my mind it. First of all, I regret learning how to smoke. I started smoking when I was 20 years old. I still clearly remember who teached and suggested smoking(?) If I had not started smoking, I don\'t need to struggle stop smoking now. I regret hurting my ex-boyfriends and other people. I know I have hurted my ex-boyfrineds when I broke with them. I was not a good girl to them. I hope they are living happy life. I must also hurt other people in many ways in spite of myself. I feel sorry to them. Oh I feel I was not a good person.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for your thoughts on this one. I really appreciate it.
I totally agree with you. Past is past. It has been done so there is no point of feeling sorry or bad about it. But, rather we move forward and try to be better individuals; loving and kind! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah

I regret many things that I had done before but I know it is useless and waste of my times keeping in my mind it.
>>I have so many regrets but it would be useless and a waste of time thinking about them and feeling sorry for it.
First of all, I regret learning how to smoke.
>>Correct
I started smoking when I was 20 years old. 
>>Correct
I still clearly remember who teached and suggested smoking(?)
>>I still clearly remember who taught and suggested me to smoke.
If I had not started smoking, I don\'t need to struggle stop smoking now.
>>If I had not started smoking, I don\'t need to struggle to stop smoking now.
I regret hurting my ex-boyfriends and other people.
>>Correct
I know I have hurted my ex-boyfrineds when I broke with them. 
>>I know I have hurt my ex-boyfriends when I broke with them. 
I was not a good girl to them.
>>Correct
I hope they are living happy life.
>>I hope that they are living a happy life now.
I must also hurt other people in many ways in spite of myself.
>>I must have also hurt other people in many ways in spite of myself.
I feel sorry to them.
>>I feel sorry for them.
Oh I feel I was not a good person.
>>Correct

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