homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
My opinion is \"Discipline\" is responsibility of parents.
because, parents educate students themselves,
there no problems.
so,I think if parents educate in their house is very good.
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Thank you for doing your homework. It\'s nice to put your thoughts into words. That\'s a great practice for your grammar and writing skills. See you tomorrow!^^
My opinion is \"Discipline\" is responsibility of parents.
>>> In my opinion, discipline is the responsibility of parents
because, parents educate students themselves,there no problems.
because, parents educate students themselves,there no problems.
>>>It\'s because parents can educate their children by themselves and there will be no problem.
so,I think if parents educate in their house is very good.
so,I think if parents educate in their house is very good.
>>> So, I think if parents will educate their children, then, their houses would be very good.
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