homework
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Do you agree with the idea that \"Life is like a dream\"? (why?/why not?)
I agreed with the idea because life is unpredictable also dream too.
i think that life is a gambling because suddenly will be died from the accident and infected serious plague.
some people can be dream by control themselves, but most people can\'t
So people have to living busy because nobody knows who will die tomorrow.
All we have to do is just to live hard every day.
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i think that life is a gambling because suddenly will be died from the accident and infected serious plague.
>>I think that life is a gamble because we can die suddenly from an accident or get infected from a serious plague.
Some people can be dream by control themselves, but most people can\'t
So people have to living busy because nobody knows who will die tomorrow.
All we have to do is just to live hard every day.
All we have to do is just to live hard every day.
I agreed with the idea because life is unpredictable also dream too.
>>I agree with that idea, because life is unpredictable, and having a dream too.
i think that life is a gambling because suddenly will be died from the accident and infected serious plague.
>>I think that life is a gamble because we can die suddenly from an accident or get infected from a serious plague.
Some people can be dream by control themselves, but most people can\'t
>>Some people can dream by controlling themselves, but most people can\'t.
So people have to living busy because nobody knows who will die tomorrow.
All we have to do is just to live hard every day.
>>So people have to live because nobody knows who will die tomorrow.
>>All we have to do is to live hard every day.
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