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Essay: Is it better to be a big fish in a small pond or a small fish in a big pond? Explain. ( This question is idiomatic )
it would be more suitable the latter because if the big fish living in small pond, the fish is not growing more and think that small pond is everything to that.
besides, fish will be cramped and fish is only depends on someone hands, so fish is waiting to feed by giving people.
in the contrary, if small fish living in small pond, it will be grow up very fast and that can be found feed itself.
but it is also have a bad things. small fish can\'t be protect to co[이름]g predator itself so always running around and hiding somewhere.
finally, life is adventure. to do bumped something and fight them. There is noting easily obtained.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It\'s good to hear your thoughts about the question.
You have a deep realization about the topic and I appreciate you for that!
When you write a complete sentence, be careful on your spelling, punctuation, and capitalization.
Here are my corrections.
it would be more suitable the latter because if the big fish living in small pond, the fish is not growing more and think that small pond is everything to that.
>> The latter would be more suitable because if the big fish lives in a small pond, the fish will not grow more and it will have limits about everything.
besides, fish will be cramped and fish is only depends on someone hands, so fish is waiting to feed by giving people.
>> Besides, fish will be cramped and it will only depend on someone\'s hands, waiting to be fed on what people give.
in the contrary, if small fish living in small pond, it will be grow up very fast and that can be found feed itself.
>> In the contrary, if a small fish lives in a small pond, it will grow up very fast and it can feed itself.
but it is also have a bad things. small fish can\'t be protect to co[이름]g predator itself so always running around and hiding somewhere.
>> But it has also bad impacts. Small fish can\'t be protected from predator so it always swims around and hides somewhere.
finally, life is adventure. to do bumped something and fight them. There is noting easily obtained.
>> Finally, life is an adventure. We bumped on something and fight against them. There is nothing easily obtained.
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