homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I wrote my mom and dad a handwritten letter on their birthday. But these days, I just give presents to my mom and dad. I miss that time today.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Ms. [Name]^^
When I was younger I used to prepare lots of cards for my family and friends. Now, I only prepare a few cards and the good thing is they still appreciate it. Writing by hand is still the sweetest I think. ^^
Writing Task: Have you ever sent a hand-written letter to someone? Please explain your answer.
When I was young, I wrote my mom and dad a handwritten letter on their birthday.
>>>CORRECT!
But these days, I just give presents to my mom and dad.
>>>But these days, I only give presents for my mom and dad.
OR: But these days, I only give presents for my parents.
I miss that time today.
>>>I miss those times today.
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