Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank You [이름]!
~Teacher Lucy
The necklace I putting on got by my girlfriend for my birthday and it has the date of birth on it.
>>The necklace I\'m putting on got by my girlfriend for my birthday and it has my birthdate on it.
I am worried which clothes do I wear for my vacation.
>>CORRECT!
>> I am worried which clothes should I wear for my vacation.
Why did you tell her that I did?
>>CORRECT!
>>How could you tell her what I did.
What are the other people diffrent it?
>>What are the differences?
What are the other informations I got to know?
>>What are the other information I got to know?
I think which one won\'t happend maybe just listen to him about the time to attend the office
>> I think it won\'t happen, just listen to him about the time to attend the meeting.
Is there anything else which one do you like?
>> Is there anything else you like?
I can do my best and to be diligence the last one is to make a lot of money for my company.
>> I can do my best to be diligence and to make a lot of money from the company.
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