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In my opinion, teenagers have job is not a good idea.
It because, teenagers are students.
So they will be must studying in the school.
But if they work,they can\'t study easily.
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In my opinion, teenagers have job is not a good idea.
>>>In my opinion, teenagers having jobs is not a good idea.
It because, teenagers are students.
It because, teenagers are students.
>>>It\'s because teenagers are students.
So they will be must studying in the school.
So they will be must studying in the school.
>>> So, they must be studying in school.
But if they work,they can\'t study easily.
But if they work,they can\'t study easily.
>>>But if they work, it would be hard for them to study.
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