Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I afraid getting old.
Because the end is death.
If I die, I can\'t think, see, talk..
I just appear in the world.
Everyone is the same so people afraid getting old.
강사 첨삭
WRITING TASK: Why do you think most people are afraid to grow old?
Because the end is death.
If I die, I can\'t think, see, talk..
I just appear in the world.
Everyone is the same so people afraid getting old.
I afraid getting old.
>> I afraid of getting old.
Because the end is death.
>> Because getting old means that you are getting close to dying.
If I die, I can\'t think, see, talk..
>> If I die, I can\'t think, see, or talk.
I just appear in the world.
>> CORRECT!
Everyone is the same so people afraid getting old.
>> Everyone is the same so people are afraid of getting old.
Dearest Lucy,
Thank you for doing your homework dear.
Please keep on writing. It will help you improve your sentence construction.
Review and practice the corrections I made for you.
Take care!
~ ♥♥ T. Louise ♥♥
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