Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Is that true that Jeju island is free visa?
Yes. Jeju is free visa when just visitors enter Jeju directly without transferring another airport. In case there is no direct flight between the visitor\'s country airport and Jeju airport, they can transfer from another airport unless going out of the transfer airport. And they must have a round trip ticket.
2. What are the most common places to visit in Jeju?
Jeju has a lot of hot places. But, I think Jeju itself is tourist attraction. There are many kinds of things to see and eat in Jeju such as beautiful beaches similar to Hawaii beaches , Halla mountain with crater, various museums, various and delicious seafoods in Jeju.
I love my country including Jeju. I can see the sprouts and a lot of flowers in Spring, dark green color in Summer, leaves of various colors in Autumn, white snow in Winter.
강사 첨삭
Happy Wednesday Bella,
Thank you for sharing a lot of information about Jeju Island.
I learned a lot about it, hopefully soon I\'ll be able to see Jeju.
Teacher Annie
1. Is that true that Jeju island is free visa?
Yes. Jeju is free visa when just visitors enter Jeju directly without transferring another airport.
>>>Yes, Jeju Island is of free visa for visitors who goes to the island directly without transferring to another airport.
In case there is no direct flight between the visitor\'s country airport and Jeju airport, they can transfer from another airport unless going out of the transfer airport.
>>>For countries without a direct flight to Jeju Island, they can transfer to another airport which is directly going to Jeju Island.
And they must have a round trip ticket.
>>>CORRECT
2. What are the most common places to visit in Jeju?
Jeju has a lot of hot places. But, I think Jeju itself is tourist attraction.
>>>Jeju has a lot of beautiful and famous places but I think Jeju Island itself is already a tourist attraction.
There are many kinds of things to see and eat in Jeju such as beautiful beaches similar to Hawaii beaches , Halla mountain with crater, various museums, various and delicious seafoods in Jeju.
>>>There are a lot of food to eat and places to see in Jeju.
Some of them are the following; some beaches are similar to what you can find in Hawaii.
Another is the Halla Mountain with it\'s beautiful crater which was considered to be a dead volcano.
You can also see some museums and try a lot of local sea foods in the island.
I love my country including Jeju. I can see the sprouts and a lot of flowers in Spring, dark green color in Summer, leaves of various colors in Autumn, white snow in Winter.
>>>I love my country including Jeju Island.
I can see the sprouts of plants and see the flowers blooming in spring.
I can witness and see the dark green color of plants and trees on summer.
Love the changing of the colors of the leaves of trees on Autumn.
And the white color of snow on winter.
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