Homework
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what I regret is that I didn’t study hard when I was a freshman in the high school.
I didn’t know that why I had to study.
I loved talking with my friends in the class, so I got a low grade.
I was depressed and my parents were disappointed with me.
When I was a second grade in high school, l had a goal and studied hard.
lf I had studied harder that time, I could had gone better university.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ellen! Thank you so much for this homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
Most of the time, we only realize things when it\'s too late. But, if given the second chance, we must really try our best and be better. ^ ^ I hope this is a great lesson for you. Now that you are a university sdutenty. I really do hope that you are doing your best with your studies so your parents can be proud of you! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
what I regret is that I didn’t study hard when I was a freshman in the high school.
>>What I regret is that I didn\'t study hard when I was a high school freshman.
I didn’t know that why I had to study.
I didn’t know that why I had to study.
>>I didn\'t know then why I had to study well.
I loved talking with my friends in the class, so I got a low grade.
I loved talking with my friends in the class, so I got a low grade.
>>Correct OR
>>I loved talking with my friends in class, so I got low grades.
I was depressed and my parents were disappointed with me.
>>Correct
When I was a second grade in high school, l had a goal and studied hard.
When I was a second grade in high school, l had a goal and studied hard.
>>When I reached second year high school I made it a goal to study hard.
lf I had studied harder that time, I could had gone better university.
>>If I had studied harder that time, I could have gone to a better university.
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