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In my opinion is easily to prepare the food was improved our lives.
It\'s because a long time ago, people was prepared food is so difficult.
But, now adays science thecnology is develop.
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In my opinion is easily to prepare the food was improved our lives.
>>>In my opinion, food is easily to prepare the food was improved our lives.
It\'s because a long time ago, people was prepared food is so difficult.
It\'s because a long time ago, people was prepared food is so difficult.
>>> It\'s because long time ago, people had difficulties preparing food.
But, now adays science thecnology is develop.
But, now adays science thecnology is develop.
>>>But nowadays, science and technology is developing.
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