Homework

Hello [이름], 

Nice to talk to you today! I do hope that you\'ll enjoy learning English. It will take time for us to develop our skills but with determination and confidence, you can achieve everything in life. For tomorrow I will give you another essay to improve your writing skills.

T. Jeny

HOMEWORK:
ESSAY:
How important is time to you?
>>Correct
When I was young, I used to spend my time playing computer games.

>>Correct

Consequently, I can control keyboard and mouse very well.

>>Consequently, I can control the keyboard and the mouse very well.

Thus, when I need to make document, I am able to make it up fast.

>>Thus, when I need to make a document, I can finish it as fast as I can.

 On the other hand, I didn’t study hard and the score wasn’t good enough to go to famous university.

>>On the other hand, I didn’t study hard and the score wasn’t good enough to go to a famous university.

As a result, I have been working in small and medium-sized enterprise and usually have to do overtime without compensations.

>>As a result, I have been working in small and medium-sized enterprise and I usually have to do overtime without compensation.

If I had learned diligently, I may enjoy my time after working.

>>Correct
 According that, I had realized a lesson.

>>From that I have learned a lesson.

If I won’t walk today, I have to run tomorrow due to catch up what I have not done.

>>If I won’t walk today, I have to run tomorrow for I have to catch up with the things I haven\'t done.
 Hence, time is the only one thing the god gives us equally.

>>Hence, time is the only thing God equally gave us.

So it is really important to me and to everyone.

>>correct