homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you agree with the idea that \"Life is like a dream\"? (why?/why not?)
Sure! i agreed with the idea because fate is found myself.
We all thank to this thing and caring yourself.
Sometimes, i was been experienced that before go to bed, i just thinking about one thing which co[이름]g true in dream.
If you have slept this purpose, you can be representing which you thought that come true.
Life is only one chance and never come back twice.
So if you make your life like a dream.
If you sleep now you will dream, but if you study now achieve your dream.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
We all thank to this thing and caring yourself.
Sometimes, i was been experienced that before go to bed, i just thinking about one thing which co[이름]g true in dream.
Life is only one chance and never come back twice.
So if you make your life like a dream.
If you sleep now you will dream, but if you study now achieve your dream.
>>If you sleep now you will dream, but if you study now you can achieve your dream.
Sure! i agreed with the idea because fate is found myself.
>>Sure! I agreed with the idea because I have fate.
We all thank to this thing and caring yourself.
>>We all have to thank to this thing and we have to take care of ourselves.
Sometimes, i was been experienced that before go to bed, i just thinking about one thing which co[이름]g true in dream.
>> I have experienced that before going to bed, i just think about one thing which would come true in a dream.
If you have slept this purpose, you can be representing which you thought that come true.
>>If you sleep with this purpose, you can be representing what you thought that you wish to come true.
Life is only one chance and never come back twice.
>>You only have one chance in life, you can never come back.
So if you make your life like a dream.
>>So, you have to make your life like a dream.
If you sleep now you will dream, but if you study now achieve your dream.
>>If you sleep now you will dream, but if you study now you can achieve your dream.
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