Homework
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강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Lucy
Who always provides the pocket money you need when you were young?
>>CORRECT!
>>Who always gives you money when you were young ?
How would you help a friend who broke up with his girlfriend?
>>CORRECT!
>>How can you help a friend who just broke up with his lover?
These day,Korea sky is gloomy so I like it because I hate a sunny weather in summer.
>>These days ,Korea sky is gloomy so I like it because I hate a sunny weather in summer.
I usually go to supermarket because I need some food materials for my meal.
>> I usually go to the supermarket because I need some food ingredients for my meal.
The earliest I can work day Is in August.
>> CORRECT!
>>The earliest I can start working is in August.
I\'m worried that about my future but I will be able to do.
>> I\'m worried that about my future but I will be able to do it.
The people I know asked me that why do you go to Australia?
>> The people I know asked me that why would you go to Australia?
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