Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your opinion on men doing \'women\'s jobs\' such as call center agent,
nurse and daycare teacher? Do you think it\'s appropriate? What would you
tell someone who discriminates and criticizes these men?
I think it’s appropriate. Each person has a job that they can do well regardless of their gender. So we don’t need to distinguish jobs by gender. Some men can do tasks well as call center agent, nurse, etc. we should not be prejudiced against jobs according to gender.
강사 첨삭
What is your opinion on men doing \'women\'s jobs\' such as call center agent,
nurse and daycare teacher? Do you think it\'s appropriate? What would you
tell someone who discriminates and criticizes these men?
I think it’s appropriate. Each person has a job that they can do well regardless of their gender.
>>Correct
So we don’t need to distinguish jobs by gender.
>> Correct
Some men can do tasks well as call center agent, nurse, etc.
>> Correct
We should not be prejudice against jobs according to gender.
>> Correct
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